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PostSubject: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:57 pm

Here's a little teaser for my story, Psychotic Snake Killer.

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“Is there a reason why you killed all those people – your family members?”

The hazel-eyed woman looked at the young British boy in front of her.

“Oh yes. Am I a savage if I don’t have a reason to killing?”

The boy’s eyes looked away from the window to the woman’s eyes, “No! That’s not what I—”

“Meant?” she stole from him.

He nodded hopelessly. The hazel-eyed woman looked out the barred plexiglass window at the gray skies.

The silence was deafening to the child visiting the inmate.

“Miss?” he asked.

“I am no ‘miss’.”

“Sorry.”

The woman looked over at him, eyes gaining a snake gleam, “No mind. Truthfully, I can’t find a reason for why I killed my family; but I tell myself—and others—that I do.”

“What would that be?” the British boy leaned forward—interested.

The woman grabbed the small notepad and black ballpoint pen. She wrote one sentence fragment, in changing font, crookedly in the middle of the page – lined page.

Unaccepted thoughts

The British boy read the fragment a few times, furrowing his eyebrows. His young eyes held confusion when his eyes met the woman’s.

“I don’t get it.” he studied her eyes curiously.

The hazel-eyed woman smiled wry, the light leaving her eyes as she took the notepad back.

About my – not pursued – interests and hobbies

The boy visiting looked at the words after the pen was set on the side and the scratching stopped.

“I still don’t get it. You killed your family because they wouldn’t accept what you liked and didn’t like?”

The hazel eyes of the woman grew tired as she gazed at the boy in front of her person. She brought her hands onto the glass table, lacing her fingers.

“How old do I look?”

The young boy blinked as he gazed at her, not used to gazing at people’s faces to tell them what he thought how old they were.

“Um… uh… thirty-two?”

The woman forced air out her nose as amusement filled her eyes—but with irritation as well—as the boy’s guess. She shook her head of brown and blonde locks.

“No. I’m—”

The police came in and interrupted them – what the woman was saying. His booming voice reverberated throughout the small cubicle room.

“Time’s up. It’s time to go.”

The boy looked up at the officer in disbelief, “What? It-it hasn’t been that long. Has it?”

The police officer looked at the boy in the chair across from the acclaimed murderer, “Time. Is. Up.”

“But-but…”

The officer gripped the British boy’s upper arm, getting him into a standing position and taking his to the door.

“Wait! I still don’t know your age!” he looked back hopelessly as he tried to prolong his forced leaving.

The door closed after him and the office, the woman still sitting there – looking just as tired as she did when she asked what he thought her age was. Those green-brown eyes so snake-like it racked a shiver down his spine.

She could see his mouth move, but she wasn’t an expert on reading lips or anything like that. So, she just held up her fingers.

The boy saw on her right hand, she held up a couple fingers and her left had taken what looked to be a shape of an ‘o’.

20

The solid wall cut off his line of vision of the sitting woman.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:18 pm

Ooo He shouldnt ever tell A woman she looks over 30, especially one that comitted murder

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:12 pm

He becomes a psycho cannibal in teh end of teh book and they have phycho sex.

:3

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sat Jan 17, 2009 10:50 pm

zOMG! I must read it! Is it a blood orgy?!

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:34 pm

Kind of, yes. But I'm only on the first chapter.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:07 pm

Oh, well then the anticipation will make it better when iots finally done and I'll be all OMG!

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:06 pm

XD You and all the others that want to read the sex scene

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:27 pm

They're all perverts! I'm going to read it because I love to read << >> yeah thats why

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:19 pm

>> ... Riiiiiiiiiight.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Mon Jan 19, 2009 7:40 pm

Well I would've read it even if there wasnt a sex scene, thats just an added bonus XD

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:50 pm

Ah... though that is a bit hard to believe.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 6:29 pm

I have other needs then just porn! (though I am on a HF right now xP) I love reading, and the stuff you write is always awesome and descriptive and bloody and perverted

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:27 pm

Razz

I know. ^^

Ty!

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:30 pm

Ty for writing them Smile

Have you ever finished any?

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:32 pm

No...

^^;

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:38 pm

Lol

Im going to die of anticipation! xD

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:40 pm

:3

I know

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:47 pm

YOU KNOW IM GOING TO DIE YET YOU CONTINUE TO PROCRASTINATE?

XD O well, the unfinished ones I read will hold me off for a while

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:25 pm

...

I'll even procrastinate on the unfinished ones.

I'll get them done.















Eventually.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:30 pm

Lol

Dont rush, I don't want you to skip any of the blood

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Tue Jan 20, 2009 9:58 pm

XD

That would take forever.

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:25 pm

Than I shall wait forever!





....................................Done yet?

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:31 am

No.....






















lol!

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:50 pm

Fine.......................................................

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PostSubject: Re: A little teaser: Psychotic Snake Killer (prologue)   Sun Feb 15, 2009 3:28 pm

=.=

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